I have to agree with the other two commenters here....a very classic story.
I like the sounds you've put in so far...have you thought about adding any more?
Also, i do this too....but be careful of handling the microphone too much while you're recording, you can hear the mic being held in this piece just a little bit. (I'm sure you'll hear it in mine as well, it takes some getting used to).
I remember you talking about this story in class, and how you loved the sound of moving boxes in the background as a way of transporting you back to that place of "move in".
I would encourage you to add more sounds like that to the piece. Even maybe a snippet of a party. I agree with Emily that the whistle is very nice, and the story itself is clear and relatable. I think with a little finesse this could turn out to be a very nice piece!
I agree that this is a classic piece, and for me, it's in part due to the narration. He seems very relaxed, as though he is just relating a story to his buddies. It doesn't seem overly rehearsed. I look forward to seeing the finished product!
Classic story.
ReplyDeleteI love the whistle in the beginning of the story! This story is definitely relatable on so many levels. Nice, clear sound. Classy.
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with the other two commenters here....a very classic story.
ReplyDeleteI like the sounds you've put in so far...have you thought about adding any more?
Also, i do this too....but be careful of handling the microphone too much while you're recording, you can hear the mic being held in this piece just a little bit. (I'm sure you'll hear it in mine as well, it takes some getting used to).
Hi Sam,
ReplyDeleteI remember you talking about this story in class, and how you loved the sound of moving boxes in the background as a way of transporting you back to that place of "move in".
I would encourage you to add more sounds like that to the piece. Even maybe a snippet of a party. I agree with Emily that the whistle is very nice, and the story itself is clear and relatable. I think with a little finesse this could turn out to be a very nice piece!
This is cool. Very relate-able. I think this is a great preliminary track, now let's see what you do with it .
ReplyDeleteI really like it, it's very relatable to many first year college students as well. I also enjoyed the sound effects.
ReplyDeleteI agree that this is a classic piece, and for me, it's in part due to the narration. He seems very relaxed, as though he is just relating a story to his buddies. It doesn't seem overly rehearsed. I look forward to seeing the finished product!
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